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Hello Attolia, welcome to YWS! I really like this piece, it's very interesting. First, I want to point out that you did indent it alright, it did work, just so ...

Ha ha, I just absolutely adore this poem! We are warriors with marshmallow armor and black licorice boots Favorite line ever! I imagined everyone in our group wearing marshmallow armor ...

Hi Jasmine!! Welcome to YWS! My name's dianne!! Okay, let me get started. I. Nitpicks It's laughing when nobody told a joke It's singing when there's no song It's taking ...

Thank you, Stella! I'll work on the tense because I also noticed that, I was just way to lazy to do anything about it. Thank you for your comments! I ...

Daniel Facing the door, Daniel sucked in a breath and placed his hands on the cold metal. Cuts run up and down his arms, blows he took from the trees ...

This poem intrigued me. I like how every line consists of a question. More specifically, I like that the questions are never answered. It just consists of hypothetical questions. It ...

I like this poem a lot. My name's dianne by the way. I love the metaphors you used to describe what people saw the speaker as and what the speaker ...

Wow, for such a short poem i found myself completely interesting in the few lines. My name's dianne! Hi! You write amazing poetry! The way you can make I semi ...

Hello, Palantalid! My name's dianne, just so you know. This poem was very interesting. I didn't understand most of it because it sounded very disjointed. Like the part about the ...

OHMAIGAWD!!! I keep reading and reading and reading this piece over and over again and I just haven't reviewed it yet! Wow,I can't believe it's taken this long to review. ...

You should seriously consider getting a career in photography. I mean, that's if you don't already have one. The pictures you take are amazing!The branches are so detailed and even ...

Wow. Thank you both. :D The whole point of the poem is to keep repeating the "I am" part. I forgot the name of the format, but it's supposed to ...

Hello, Sureal. Is that supposed to be like "Surreal"? with two "R"s? Sorry, I get distracted easily. And you don't have to answer that if you don't want to, it's ...

Paper planes, water bottles, and cardboard boxes Graded homework, bubble wrap, and my drained Pepsi cans Old gum wrappers, today’s newspaper, and the unread novels lining my DVD shelf, My ...

This is chapter one of what I hope to keep continuing of "Gone". If you haven't read the first part of the story, please read it! And if you want ...